Chapter 1: Page 28

posted April 17th, 2016, 3:23 pm


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April 17th, 2016, 3:27 pm

Qlock

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Update again, what else to say. Thanks again, for the feedback. xD Soon we'll finally get to the pages I drew after Christmas, when I learned how to use an ink pen properly ...

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April 17th, 2016, 5:44 pm

Wigglytuff (Guest)

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...if you've been going on thus far "without knowing how to use an ink pen properly", then I can't possibly imagine the treat in store for when you "learned how to use an ink pen properly".

This new story is running along so very nicely! My faith was not misplaced- not that I feared it would be. Keep up the good stuff, Q. :D

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April 19th, 2016, 1:03 am

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I'm not sure how to feel about this guy. On the one hand, he's acting awfully high and mighty for somebody who doesn't seem able to handle things himself. On the other hand, grief can bring out the worst in people. It's an interesting page nonetheless.

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April 19th, 2016, 11:43 am

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@melaredblu: Right? I mean, he must really care deeply for his daughter to go himself when he could have just sent some personnel. And nobody likes being told to just wait around and maybe see if his daughter isn't actually dead, so it's understandable that he's really upset and stressed.

I just realized the irony that the King's search for his child led to the eradication of a dragon's nest and her babies.
Which was really sad, but when you think about it, it isn't much different from fumigators coming in to suffocate rats out of people's houses. (or is that termites?? Either way it's the same principle)
Unless the dragon's were intelligent? Then maybe that's a different story.

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April 20th, 2016, 5:15 am

SouLIke (Guest)

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Nice emotions and facial expressions there. I love how the baron behaved here, more like a proper ruler demanding action and less like the buffoon I used to see him as. Shows us some other sides of the baron and how the MC reacts to this situation, great way to change the audiences perspective on your characters, nicely done man.

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April 21st, 2016, 7:16 pm

MaliciousGravy

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You really got me with mixed emotions. He was acting so high and mighty just now but he obviously cares about his daughter. I initially found him annoying, but this kind of situation will freak anyone out.

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April 24th, 2016, 5:10 pm

WiispNightmare

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I'm still waiting for a dragon whisperer

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April 24th, 2016, 11:27 pm

tylion

Jeez

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Yeesh, your art keeps getting better and better QLock. It's kind of scary...

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