Chapter 1: Page 59

posted June 12th, 2016, 5:12 pm


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June 12th, 2016, 5:12 pm

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And that marks the end of the first chapter. I hope you enjoyed reading it as I certainly enjoyed making it (not without shedding some stressful tears as the deadline kept looming over me). While I can barely stand looking at some of the pages (especially the early ones), I'm quite happy with it and I've learned a lot in the 6 months it took me to create it. I've started working on Chapter 2 (which will also be part of my degree) but I'm gonna give me some time to create a buffer before I start uploading it. And of course. Thanks for commenting, liking or just reading! :)

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June 12th, 2016, 7:25 pm

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I wonder what shenanigans lay in their path

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June 12th, 2016, 7:25 pm

Aline1

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Oh I am certainly enjoying it and I still love the Baron as a character though he has been left behind. I am certainly looking forward to the next chapter when it eventually comes.

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June 12th, 2016, 8:31 pm

Buddy Boi (Guest)

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Nice to see some gay representation!

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June 12th, 2016, 11:22 pm

Mr. Sorry For Writing Too Much (Guest)

Yey!

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Wow, very nice, really! And seriously, you should totally publish this!
I can't wait for chapter 2, but while we wait, I must say I honestly missed some kind of reference in the final page that would tell the readers this part of the story is over (even it being pretty obvious).
Anyway, your art is still astonishing and your characters still show a lot of personality. I wonder, however, what's up with the girl and the whole dragon helping thing. I can of course understand that she doesn't see dragons as the monsters people believe they are, but in a world where dragons seem to be considered pests by people, I was expecting her to make a point (or a very long speech) about it to the dragonslayer and her father or something of the sort. Anyway, let's see what happens next.
And by the way, good luck with your degree!

Best regards from this Br Fan! o/

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July 24th, 2016, 3:29 pm

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@Mr. Sorry For Writing Too Much: Yes, I realise some 'end of chapter' would have been suitable here. Didn't realise this until I saw it in print though ... but at least I'll think about it in the future from now on.

As for Gwen and dragons, well, there will be more on it in the future ...

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June 13th, 2016, 1:02 am

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I mean, between her and her father, I would imagine she would make a less insufferable travelling companion.

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June 13th, 2016, 1:49 am

nopester (Guest)

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I'll miss the Baron, but it should be interesting to see where this goes

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June 13th, 2016, 6:34 pm

Zero (Guest)

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I can't say I have any coherent praise I can write here, but I'm very excited for what's to come, especially new dragons and characters who'll hopefully be more nice than the baron!

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June 13th, 2016, 11:08 pm

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Beautiful set up!! I can't wait to see what types of shenanigans these two hoodlums will get up to! XD
I imagine Varin will be very practical but cold in his decisions, and Gwen will be more bossy but empathetic. They're a really interesting combination! Already the character development is astounding.

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July 9th, 2016, 12:56 pm

Kroki (Guest)

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Hey, just read the whole chapter and wow, it's great!
A small "End of Chapter" could have helped close it at this page, but overall the narration is really fluid, the characters are interesting and their interactions enjoyable. And the art is FANTASTIC. Chara-design, dynamism, backgrounds and landscapes, lightings... Wow !
I would really love to see how you draw and paint your pages, have you thought about doing a breakdown of your process with WIPs and such? That would be awesome <3
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Really glad to see your original project come to life!

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July 24th, 2016, 3:20 pm

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@Kroki: Hey, thanks and glad you like it. And yes, I have thought about doing wips and stuff, maybe on twitter. I wouldn't mind doing any breakdowns of the process either, but perhaps when I have a bit more time on my hand. But if people are interested, I'll definitely add it to my to-do-list.

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July 18th, 2016, 7:59 pm

enxame

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Really nice comic, liked how the dragons are portrayed as "common" creatures :)

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