Chapter 2: Page 11

posted August 21st, 2016, 2:16 pm


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August 22nd, 2016, 1:01 am

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His house, his rules. Honestly, I like the dragons and how they're designed and portrayed, but I kind of side with him in this instance. This is the only home he has. He's gotta do what he can do protect it. Though he really should have pest-proofed it better. Even he admitted as much with regards to patching the roof.

His frazzled expression in panel two is also priceless.

Speaking of panel two, I hate to be That Guy, but I think the the word order would flow better if you changed it to "...they'll burn everything rather than..."

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August 28th, 2016, 12:41 pm

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@melaredblu: That's fine, you're right. I should really start reading things out loud ... Anyway, I'll remember to fix it when I sit down to edit.

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